homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hello T. Sharon! THis is my homework.
Yes, I care what other people think of me.
So I live quietly at school. And I care about my appearance.
Good night! bye bye!
강사 첨삭
Hi Irene!
Please check the corrections.
I know you can get them the next time.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes, I care what other people think of me.
>> Yes, I care about what other people think of me.
So I live quietly at school.
So I live quietly at school.
>> That\'s why I just stay quiet in school.
And I care about my appearance.
>> I also care about my appearance.
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