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There are so many ways to help the poor. Among them, the way I can do is to donate money to an organization that helps the poor. It\'s a great help just by donating there.
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There are so many ways to help the poor.
- Teacher Angela
>> CORRECT
Among them, the way I can do is to donate money to an organization that helps the poor.
>> Among the ways I can help, I can donate money to an organization that helps the poor.
It\'s a great help just by donating there.
>> Giving them donation is a great help.
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