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Q: Is it fine for women to smoke?
A: I think no problem because it a personal choice.
But i want everyone non-smoke. Because the smell give me stress and damage
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
I agree with you, even if we hope that everyone will become non-smokers, at the end of the day it is still a personal choice. I had a good friend in the past, who quit smoking because she was in love with someone. When she fell out of love, she went back to smoking again, I guess that is where she vents her frustration and heartache.
Have a great day ahead!
T. Aki~
I think no problem because it a personal choice.
>>> I think no problem because it is a personal choice.
But i want everyone non-smoke. Because the smell give me stress and damage.
>>> But I want everyone to be a non-smoker. Because the smell gives me stress and damage.
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