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I want to get a surgery if there isn\'t any sequela after plastic surgery.
I saw many times its after effects from celebrities and neighbors.
People who haven\'t got surgery are getting old pretty and naturally. That\'s why I hate taking surgery.
Some people can get a job and meet partner.
Most of all they can be even confident in public.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]ny!
I want to point out what you mentioned in your third sentence that we get old being pretty naturally.
And on more thing is acceptance of what we have now. I am not saying that it\'s bad to get surgery but the result is also important. will it satisfy the person? It is ll based on our decision. Have a great day!
Aki~
I want to get a surgery if there isn\'t any sequela after plastic surgery.
>>> I want to get surgery if there isn\'t any consequence after plastic surgery.
I saw many times its after-effects from celebrities and neighbors.
>>> I have seen many times its after-effects from celebrities and neighbors.
People who haven\'t got surgery are getting old pretty and naturally. That\'s why I hate taking surgery.
>>> People who haven\'t had surgery are getting old pretty and naturally. That\'s why I hate taking surgery.
Some people can get a job and meet partner.
>>> Some people can get a job and meet a partner.
Most of all they can be even confident in public.
>> CORRECT!
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