Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The bees help flowers to bloom. It is very important. Our communities have to stop global warming. I\'ve heard that it is one of the reasons that bees were died.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry! t\'s alarming to hear that global warming has been linked to declining bee populations. We definitely need to take action in our communities to address climate change and protect these essential pollinators. ^^
~ Teacher Maxine
The bees help flowers to bloom.
>> The bees help flowers bloom.
It is very important.
>> CORRECT
Our communities have to stop global warming.
>> CORRECT
I\'ve heard that it is one of the reasons that bees were died.
>> I\'ve heard that it is one of the reasons that bees have died.
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