HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : Should parents help their children plan their future? Why?
A : Because young children cannot plan, parents need to set directions. That way, you don\'t go in the wrong direction.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Steve! That makes sense. Clear directions definitely help in guiding children effectively.
~ Teacher Maxine
Because young children cannot plan, parents need to set directions.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Because young children cannot plan, parents need to give directions.
That way, you don\'t go in the wrong direction.
>> CORRECT
OR >> That way, they won\'t go in the wrong direction.
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