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학생이 쓴 원문
I agree to exist the death penalty.
People who commit crime against the law have to be afraid of result.
Generous punishment is caused by another hideous crimes .
These days people kill others easily although they are normal people.
This situation is came from insensitivity of crimes and its
punishments.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Ms. [이름]ny!
The effectiveness of the death penalty in solving a crime is still in process. My thoughts remain on the worst punishment that I mentioned before.
Thank you for giving your thoughts here. Enjoy the day!
Aki~
I agree to exist the death penalty.
>>> I agree that the death penalty will exist again.
People who commit crime against the law have to be afraid of result.
>>> People who commit crimes against the law have to be afraid of results.
Generous punishment is caused by another hideous crimes .
>>> Generous punishment is caused by other hideous crimes.
These days people kill others easily although they are normal people.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> These days, people kill others easily even without the intention.
This situation is came from insensitivity of crimes and its punishments.
>>> This situation came from the insensitivity of crimes and their punishments.
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