Homework
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Q: Do you prefer online or offline classes? Why?
A: For my grades, I prefer offline classes.
If I have an online class, there are too much disturbances near me, so I can\'t concentrate on the class, and that\'ll make my grade worse.
But for convenience, I prefer online classes because I don\'t need to move.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If I have an online class, there are too much disturbances near me, so I can\'t concentrate on the class, and that\'ll make my grade worse.
3. But for convenience, I prefer online classes because I don\'t need to move.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. For my grades, I prefer offline classes.
>>CORRECT!
2. If I have an online class, there are too much disturbances near me, so I can\'t concentrate on the class, and that\'ll make my grade worse.
>>If I have an online class, there are too many disturbances near me, so I can\'t concentrate in class, and that\'ll make my grade worse.
3. But for convenience, I prefer online classes because I don\'t need to move.
>>CORRECT!
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