Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What would you like to purchase if ever you win the lottery?
A: I\'d like to just save it right then.
I don\'t want to spend my money right then, and regret it after, and I can also spend whenever I want if I save it.
Also, I don\'t really have something I want to buy right now,
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I don\'t want to spend my money right then, and regret it after, and I can also spend whenever I want if I save it.
3. Also, I don\'t really have something I want to buy right now.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I\'d like to just save it right then.
>>I\'d like to save it right away.
2. I don\'t want to spend my money right then, and regret it after, and I can also spend whenever I want if I save it.
>>I don\'t want to spend my money right away and regret it after, and I can also spend whenever I want to if I save it.
3. Also, I don\'t really have something I want to buy right now.
>>CORRECT!
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