HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : Are there any traditional drinks from your culture or country that you enjoy? What is it and why?
A : The representative of traditional culture is the \"ondol\" system.
The \"ondol\" system is a heating system that warms the entire floor of a room. It can keep you warm in the winter.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Steve!
That sounds fascinating! It must be really effective for keeping warm during the winter. Thanks for sharing about this.
~ Teacher Maxine
The representative of traditional culture is the \"ondol\" system.
>> CORRECT
The \"ondol\" system is a heating system that warms the entire floor of a room.
>> CORRECT
It can keep you warm in the winter.
>> It can keep you warm in winter.
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