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2012-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Did you close the door? (to close) 2) Did Claire finish the housework? (to finish) 3) Did he have a bath yesterday? (to have) 4) Did the boy jump into the lake? (to jump) 5) Did Ronald visit the Tower of London? (to visit) I finally confessed to preist last Saturday. I realized why I couldn't confess on Sunday before last. I waited at other confessionals. It was not used. Oh my god! I criticized the priest not to come the confessionals. but I was a fool. I couldn't confess directly about it last Saturday. I said to priest "For these and all my sins, I am very sorry". I believe that the word "all my sins" inclued the sins that I couldn't tell. Anyway, my mission was done! I have to correct the habit that I blame another.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear Miss. [Name], Happy Monday! About your confession alst SUnday, don\'t worry about that, it was an honest mistake,kkk..And it won\'t happen again for sure coz you already know the place,kk ANyway, talk to you alter my dear.. Teacher Cam^^ 1) Did you close the door? (to close) >>correct2) Did Claire finish the housework? (to finish) >>correct3) Did he have a bath yesterday? (to have) >>correct4) Did the boy jump into the lake? (to jump) >>correct5) Did Ronald visit the Tower of London? (to visit) >>correctI finally confessed to preist last Saturday. >>correctI realized why I couldn\'t confess on Sunday before last. >>I realized why I couldnt confess last Sunday.I waited at other confessionals. It was not used. >>correct >>I waited at the other confessional which was not used.Oh my god! >>correctI criticized the priest not to come the confessionals. but I was a fool. >>I criticized the priest not having the cinfession and I was a fool.I couldn\'t confess directly about it last Saturday. >>correctI said to priest \"For these and all my sins, I am very sorry\". >>correctI believe that the word \"all my sins\" inclued the sins that I couldn\'t tell. >>correctAnyway, my mission was done! >>correctI have to correct the habit that I blame another. >>I have to correct the habit of blaming others.

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