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Eating salad only a time a day is good for way of diet, not every meals.
Thesedays many salad\'s restaurants are increasing in korea.
I think we have to have enough nutrition from the other 2 meals.
Most of all The lack of nutrition can make my body muscle weak.
So we should ajust the diet from doing exercise better than eating.
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Ms. [이름]ny!
Eating salad alone can be healthy as long as it\'s well-balanced and provides a variety of nutrients. Incorporating a range of ingredients ensures you get a mix of vitamins, minerals, and other essential nutrients your body need, that\'s according to Google, but personlaly , I don\'t eat salad alone hahaa.
Have a good day!
Aki~
Eating salad only a time a day is good for way of diet, not every meals.
>>> Eating salad only one time a day is a good way of diet but not every meal.
These days many salad\'s restaurants are increasing in Korea.
>>> These days, salad restaurants are increasing in Korea.
I think we have to have enough nutrition from the other 2 meals.
>>> CORRECT!
Most of all the lack of nutrition can make my body muscle weak.
>>> CORRECT!
So we should ajust the diet from doing exercise better than eating.
>>> So we should adjust the diet from doing exercise better than eating.
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