homework
학생이 쓴 원문
if you go to the gym and ride a station bike regually You can lose weight in a short period of time.
Excessive dieting is not good for your health.
but ,we need to control our diet.
n the past, if you excel at one thing, you get a job. But not these days.
She is already excell at singing.
though, I don\'t stop trying.
I presently like the actor since I fell in love with him in the movie.
before i live in studio apartment,
i want to be live in there but now is not
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Make sentences using the words and expressions below, including the conjunctions given:
if you go to the gym and ride a station bike regually You can lose weight in a short period of time.
>> If you go to the gym and ride a stationary bike regularly, you can lose weight in a short period of time.
Excessive dieting is not good for your health.
>> CORRECT~~
but ,we need to control our diet.
>> But we still need to control our diet.
n the past, if you excel at one thing, you get a job. But not these days.
>> In the past, you excelled at one thing, you could get a job, but not these days.
She is already excell at singing.
>> She is already excellent at singing.
>> OR: She already excels at singing.
though, I don\'t stop trying.
>> OR: Though I don\'t stop trying, I still can\'t achieve my goal.
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