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my apartment is location around factory.
so there are many inconvenient things to live. for example i have to endure noisy and bad air .
The biggest drawback is that there are no good facilities around.
If we want to hang out with our friends, we walk to the city a lot
I have to go to the city called Daegu, which is close to me.
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Please tell me about the place where you live. Describe your house. Where is it located? Describe it in as much detail as possible.
my apartment is location around factory. so there are many inconvenient things to live. for example i have to endure noisy and bad air .
>> My apartment is located in a factory area so there are many inconveniences, for example, I have to endure the noise and bad air quality.
The biggest drawback is that there are no good facilities around.
>> CORRECT~~
If we want to hang out with our friends, we walk to the city a lot
>> If we want to hang out with our friends, we have to endure a long-distance walk to the city.
I have to go to the city called Daegu, which is close to me.
>> I have to go to the city called Daegu, which is close to our district.
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