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Last summer vacation was worst in my life.
I had a reservation a high-priced hotel for 2days.
It was the first time I had reserved a luxury hotel.
We went to there but my husband couldn\\\'t sleep there.
During the 2night 3days . He went to Seoul twice .
Because he didn\\\'t report his vacation officially.
I was upset
In addition I drove his car when I came back home.
He took the train everytime .
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Ms. [이름]ny!
You are one of the kindest women I\'ve ever met ^^. Have a good day!
Aki~
Last summer vacation was worst in my life.
>>> Last summer vacation was the worst in my life.
I had a reservation a high-priced hotel for 2days.
>>> I had a reservation at a high-priced hotel for 2 days.
It was the first time I had reserved a luxury hotel.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> It was the first time I made a reservation in a luxury hotel.
We went to there but my husband couldn\\\'t sleep there.
>>> We checked in but my husband couldn\'t sleep there.
During the 2night 3days . He went to Seoul twice .
>>> During our trip for 3 days and 2 nights, my husband has to go back to Seoul twice.
Because he didn\'t report his vacation officially.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Becuase he didn\'t file a leave formwork.
I was upset
>>> CORRECT!
In addition I drove his car when I came back home.
>>> In addition, I have to drive his car back home.
He took the train everytime .
>> Because he took the train every time he went back to Seoul.
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