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학생이 쓴 원문
If the bad situation happens to me , I will avoid that.
I don\'t want to ruin my trip.
So I am trying to put up with that situations.
In fact, other people except my family don\'t seriously affect to my emotion.
Sometimes I didn\'t talk people who hurt my emotion while our travelling.
I realized how much I was foolish.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
Anything can ruin a good trip. it just depends on how you handle it. will it ruin the whole trip or ignore it (if possible)?
Enjoy the [이름]shine!
Aki~
If the bad situation happens to me , I will avoid that.
>>> I try to avoid bad situation that might happen to me.
I don\'t want to ruin my trip.
>>> I don\'t want that to ruin my trip.
So I am trying to put up with that situations.
>>>So I am trying to put up with that situation.
In fact, other people except my family don\'t seriously affect to my emotion.
>>> In fact, I am not emotionally affected by other people except my family.
Sometimes I didn\'t talk people who hurt my emotion while our travelling.
>>> So sometimes, I don\'t talk to people about my emotions while we are on a trip.
I realized how much I was foolish.
>>> CORRECT!
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