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Q: How could public transport in your city be improved?
A: I think Seoul have good enough public transportation. So need progress than improvement. Among them, I am interested in is Urban Air Mobility(UAM). It is new solution to the problem of urban transport.
From here on, it is hard to explain with my English level, so I brought the dictionary as it is 😢
UAM is a transportation system that includes connections with other land public transportation systems as well as safe operating infrastructure such as airframe, communication, navigation, monitoring, traffic management, and vertiport, where UAM airframe can take off and land.
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Yeah, that is one I also admire in Korea, your public tranprtation.
Thank you for sharing this. Have a good day!
T. Aki~
I think Seoul have good enough public transportation.
>>> I think Seoul has good enough public transportation.
So need progress than improvement.
>>> So it needs progress rather than improvement.
Among them, I am interested in is Urban Air Mobility(UAM).
>>> Among them, I am interested in is the Urban Air Mobility(UAM).
It is new solution to the problem of urban transport.
>>> It is a new solution to the problem of urban transport.
From here on, it is hard to explain with my English level, so I brought the dictionary as it is.
>>> CORRECT
UAM is a transportation system that includes connections with other land public transportation systems as well as safe operating infrastructure such as airframe, communication, navigation, monitoring, traffic management, and vertiport, where UAM airframe can take off and land.
>>> CORRECT
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