Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are reasons Korea focuses on education. I am going to tell you a reason why Korea focuses so much on education.
The first reason is that Korea only has knowledge-based industries since Korea doesn;t have any natural resources to sell. So they sell technology, and they need brain, not muscles. So they only collect people with nice knowledge.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Daniel!
There are reasons Korea focuses on education.
>>> correct
I am going to tell you a reason why Korea focuses so much on education.
>>> correct
>>> correct
The first reason is that Korea only has knowledge-based industries since Korea doesn\'t have any natural resources to sell.
>>> correct
So they sell technology, and they need brain, not muscles.
>>> correct
>>> OR: So they sell technology, and they need intellect, not muscles.
So they only collect people with nice knowledge.
>>> OR: So they hone people to be knowledgeable.
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