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Due to global warming, Korea changed from four seasons to two.
In addition, in summer getting hotter than before. So It\'s so humid that as soon as I hang the laundry. it dries fast speed.
plus i can find mold or many kind of bugs every where in my house I kept watching it
I can feel how sweet cold of winter is.
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John Steinbeck asked, \"What good is the warmth of summer, without the cold of winter to give it sweetness.\" Do we need winter so that we appreciate summer?
Due to global warming, Korea changed from four seasons to two.
>> Due to global warming, Korea has changed from having four seasons to two.
In addition, in summer getting hotter than before.
>> In addition, summer is getting hotter than before.
So It\'s so humid that as soon as I hang the laundry.
>> It\'s so humid that I can feel the humidity as soon as I hang the laundry.
it dries fast speed.
>> So it dries fast.
plus i can find mold or many kind of bugs every where in my house I kept watching it
>> Plus, I can find molds or many kinds of bugs everywhere in my house.
I can feel how sweet cold of winter is.
>> NOTE: My apologies but I don\'t know what this means.
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