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Q: Do you practice saving whenever you get your salary?
A: Yes, more than 50% is save in the bank. Not now, I have three savings accounts when I was working.
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Hi there [이름] [이름]!
Saving is a fundamental aspect of financial well-being, allowing you to manage risks, achieve goals, and build a secure future.
Having this knd of practice as young as you are, makes you more responsible and not an impulsive spender.
Saving is a fundamental aspect of financial well-being, allowing you to manage risks, achieve goals, and build a secure future.
Having this knd of practice as young as you are, makes you more responsible and not an impulsive spender.
Have a good day!
T. Aki~
Yes, more than 50% is save in the bank.
>>> CORRECT!
Not now, I have three savings accounts when I was working.
>>> I used to have three savings acoount when I was working.
>>> I used to have three savings acoount when I was working.
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