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There are many tall buildings in the city, but they continue to build, so they create a lot of bad air in the process.
Also, although the government\'s strict policy, many people throw away their trash without recycling. so it causes air pollution and the environment becomes dirty, whether city or countryside they ends up being damaged. we have to interested in environment
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What damage do cities do to the countryside?
There are many tall buildings in the city, but they continue to build, so they create a lot of bad air in the process.
>> There are many tall buildings in the city, but they continue to build more, which results in bad air quality.
Also, although the government\'s strict policy, many people throw away their trash without recycling.
>> Also, despite the government\'s strict policy, many people don\'t dispose of their trash properly and don\'t recycle.
so it causes air pollution and the environment becomes dirty, whether city or countryside they ends up being damaged.
>> This pollutes not only the air but also the land and water so whether it\'s the city or the countryside, both end up being damaged.
we have to interested in environment
>> Therefore, we have to show interest and pay attention to the environment.
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