Homework.

2012-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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1. The Volga is -- the longest -- river in Europe and the 16th longest one in the world. 2. Britain is one of -- ????? -- countries in the world. 3. It is -- more crowded -- than even China and India. 4. And England is -- overpopulated -- country in Europe. 5. Both my parents are working, but my mother makes -- more -- money than my father. 6. Leyla used to be -- thin -- until two years ago; she has gained a lot of weight, so she is very fat now. 7. My classmate Jake's English grade is -- better -- than mine. 8. In fact, Jake's grade is -- the best -- of all in our class.

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thank you for exerting effort in doing your homework. I appreciate it. Just continue to practice. I know you can do better because you are determined to learn! Keep it going! T. Verna Here are your corrections: 1. The Volga is -- the longest -- river in Europe and the 16th longest one in the world. >>CORRECT2. Britain is one of -- ????? -- countries in the world. >>the most overpopulated3. It is -- more crowded -- than even China and India. >>CORRECT4. And England is -- overpopulated -- country in Europe. >>the most crowded5. Both my parents are working, but my mother makes -- more -- money than my father. >>CORRECT6. Leyla used to be -- thin -- until two years ago; she has gained a lot of weight, so she is very fat now. >>thinner7. My classmate Jake\'s English grade is -- better -- than mine. >>CORRECT8. In fact, Jake\'s grade is -- the best -- of all in our class. >>CORRECT

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