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Q: When is using emotions a problem?
A: I think using emotions would be a problem when people are deciding something serious.
I think it would be a problem because usually emotional decisions bring temporary fulfillment, but they should think a bout future too.
Also, it might be a problem when their judging about one\'s punishment.
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2. I think it would be a problem because usually emotional decisions bring temporary fulfillment, but they should think a bout future too.
3. Also, it might be a problem when their judging about one\'s punishment.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think using emotions would be a problem when people are deciding something serious.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think it would be a problem because usually emotional decisions bring temporary fulfillment, but they should think a bout future too.
>>I think it would be a problem because emotional decisions usually bring temporary fulfillment, but they should think about the future, too.
3. Also, it might be a problem when their judging about one\'s punishment.
>>Also, it might be a problem when they\'re judging about someone\'s punishment.
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