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2012-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) apple your this is Is this your apple? 2) Are you happy Are you happy? 3) Is Josephine your name Is your name Josephine? 4) are old comics the Are the comics old? 5) is in Charlie your class Is your class in Charlie? I'm afraid that Summer approaches. I hate to drop sweat. so I don't like excercise. In Summer, I sweat even when I just sit. I sweat a lot than others. And my house on the top floor is very hot. Yesterday, my room temperature was 28 degrees at night. Over 25 degrees at night is called the tropical night in Korea. This usally appears in the middle of Summer. But my house had on these. I pulled out an electronic fan in the storage. I might clean my air donditioner next week. It is getting hot. I was learned that our contry has four seasons. But it mightn't be true. We just have two seasons hot or cold.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Miss. [Name]..:) Thank you for once again dropping in your composition and two thumbs up for doing a great job! I always appreciate you doing your homework my dear, thank you so much.. Oh and by the way, I do understand that you don\'t want to perspire coz we have the same thing in common. It\'s also very very hot here in the Philippines and it makes me really s[이름]py most specially in the afternoon. ANyway, we will talk more about this later in our class my dear.. Teacher Cam^^ 1) apple your this is Is this your apple? >>correct2) Are you happy Are you happy? >>correct3) Is Josephine your name Is your name Josephine? >>correct4) are old comics the Are the comics old? >>correct5) is in Charlie your class Is your class in Charlie?>>Is Charlie in your class?I\'m afraid that Summer approaches. >>correct >>I\'m afraid that Summer is fast approaching.I hate to drop sweat. so I don\'t like excercise. >>I hate perspiring taht\'s why I don\'t like to workout.In Summer, I sweat even when I just sit. I sweat a lot than others. >>correctAnd my house on the top floor is very hot. >>And my attic is very hot.Yesterday, my room temperature was 28 degrees at night. >>correctOver 25 degrees at night is called the tropical night in Korea. >>correctThis usally appears in the middle of Summer. >>correct But my house had on these. >>But I experience this at home.I pulled out an electronic fan in the storage. >>correctI might clean my air donditioner next week. >>correct (conditioner)It is getting hot. >>correctI was learned that our contry has four seasons. >>I learned that our country has 4 seasons. But it mightn\'t be true. >>correctWe just have two seasons hot or cold. >>correct

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