Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What do you think motivates people to seek out exciting experiences?
A: I think usually some stories of other people or books can motivate people.
I think most people feel like they also want to venture when they read or heard of a story which a person ventured and succeeded.
And I think sometimes people get motivated with out any reasons.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I think most people feel like they also want to venture when they read or heard of a story which a person ventured and succeeded.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to remember:
1. I think usually some stories of other people or books can motivate people.
>>I think some stories of other people or books can usually motivate people.
2. I think most people feel like they also want to venture when they read or heard of a story which a person ventured and succeeded.
>>I think most people feel like they also want to venture when they read or heard of a story of a person who ventured and succeeded.
3. And I think sometimes people get motivated with out any reasons.
>>And I think that sometimes people get motivated without any reasons.
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