Homework
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Q: When can you say that you are successful?
A: I think I can say I\'m successful when I achieved something I wanted to.
I think just for me, achieving something means I\'ve succeeded something and I can get the fulfillment, so I\'m successful then.
But I think usually people say they\'re successful when they\'ve earn a lot.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think just for me, achieving something means I\'ve succeeded something and I can get the fulfillment, so I\'m successful then.
3. But I think usually people say they\'re successful when they\'ve earn a lot.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I think I can say I\'m successful when I achieved something I wanted to.
>>I think I can say that I\'m successful when I achieve something I want.
2. I think just for me, achieving something means I\'ve succeeded something and I can get the fulfillment, so I\'m successful then.
>>I think just for me, achieving something means I\'ve succeeded on something, and I can get the fulfillment, so I\'m successful by then.
3. But I think usually people say they\'re successful when they\'ve earn a lot.
>>But I think usually people say they\'re successful when they\'ve earned a lot.
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