homework

2012-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Thank you teacher. today i am surprised your korea speak 'thank you'. l also appreciate kind teacher. my answer are : I don't agree. because women have differently abled men. example women have motherly love. so women can politics like taking care of the children.

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear! Thanks for doing your homework! Just be reminded to capitalize the first word of your sentence. Nonetheless, it\'s very good!  ^^ You have a good point dear. I think so too that women can engage in politics and that they should not be restricted to work in connection to home and children.^^, Oh, are you surprised? It\'s only one of the few Korean words I know, haha! Thank you for your time this morning, my dear. I will see you again tomorrow! T. Lorraine Thank you teacher. >> Correct! >> Thank you Teacher Lorraine. today i am surprised your korea speak \'thank you\'. >> Today I am surprised with you saying \'Thank you\' in Korean. l also appreciate kind teacher. >> l also appreciate kind teachers.  >> OR  l also appreciate a kind teacher like you.  my answer are : >>My answers are:  >> This is my answer: I don\'t agree because women have differently abled men. >> I don\'t agree because women have different abilities than men. example women have motherly love. >> For example, women have a mother\'s love. so women can politics like taking care of the children. >> So women can engage in politics and so with taking care of their children.

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