Homework
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Q: Who are some people you respect the most?
A: I respect all the people who invented or discovered something.
Every inventions and discoveries have contributed to human beings development, and it made our live much more comfortable.
And I also respect our parents because they led me here with a lot of attention and care.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Every inventions and discoveries have contributed to human beings development, and it made our live much more comfortable.
3. And I also respect our parents because they led me here with a lot of attention and care.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I respect all the people who invented or discovered something.
>>CORRECT!
2. Every inventions and discoveries have contributed to human beings development, and it made our live much more comfortable.
>>Every invention and discovery have contributed to human beings\' development, and it made our lives much more comfortable.
3. And I also respect our parents because they led me here with a lot of attention and care.
>>And I also respect my parents because they led me here with a lot of attention and care.
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