Homework
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Q: What lessons do we get from sad movies?
A: I think we usually get the lesson about preventing bad things.
In most sad movies, the characters get challenges because they didn\'t prevent the bad thing and it brings a lot of bad effects for them.
So, if people watch sad movies, they would think about the bad thing happened in the movie, and they\'ll get to know how to prevent.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. In most sad movies, the characters get challenges because they didn\'t prevent the bad thing and it brings a lot of bad effects for them.
3. So, if people watch sad movies, they would think about the bad thing happened in the movie, and they\'ll get to know how to prevent.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think we usually get the lesson about preventing bad things.
>>CORRECT!
2. In most sad movies, the characters get challenges because they didn\'t prevent the bad thing and it brings a lot of bad effects for them.
>>In most sad movies, the characters get challenges because they don\'t prevent the bad thing, bringing a lot of bad effects for them.
3. So, if people watch sad movies, they would think about the bad thing happened in the movie, and they\'ll get to know how to prevent.
>>So, if people watch sad movies, they will think about the bad thing that will happen, and they\'ll try to think how to prevent it.
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