homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Does Peter live with his father?
2) Do you learn Spanish?
3) Does Andrew and Martin ride their bikes to school?
4) Do they play in the garden?
5) Does Sandy's hamster live in a cage?
It's getting closer the exam day.
But I haven't studied yet. I couldn't focus on the book.
It's getting hotter and my house is more hot than out.
I thought that the library should be cool and good place to study.
Actually, I went to the library to study last Monday.
But it was a wrong idea.
The library didn't run an air condition yet, it's just Spring now but very hot Spring.
Moreover, there were many dirty men like homeless in the library.
They smelt nasty. There was even drinking a soup of ramen man.
I couldn't bear and I came back home within 30 minutes of arriving at the library.
I have no place for studing. So I can't study.
These all is just my excuses to dislike studing.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Miss. [Name],
Thanky ou for dropping in your composition today, and again job well done!
I totally understand that it\'s really difficult to study having a very hot weather. In my case, I would rather s[이름]p than to study maybe, kkk..
But you know Miss. [Name], that it\'s your dream to work in the national library, so ajah!! Just study hard my dear and I know you can do it..:)
talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
1) Does Peter live with his father?
>>correct2) Do you learn Spanish?
>>correct3) Does Andrew and Martin ride their bikes to school?
>>correct4) Do they play in the garden?
>>correct5) Does Sandy\'s hamster live in a cage?>>correctIt\'s getting closer the exam day.
>>My exam is fast approaching.But I haven\'t studied yet. I couldn\'t focus on the book.
>>correctIt\'s getting hotter and my house is more hot than out.
>>It\'s getting hotter and my house is even hotter on the inside.I thought that the library should be cool and good place to study.
>>correct
>>I thought that it\'s better to study in the library because it\'s a cool place but its not.Actually, I went to the library to study last Monday.
>>correctBut it was a wrong idea.
>>correctThe library didn\'t run an air condition yet, it\'s just Spring now but very hot Spring.
>>There are no airconditioners functioning in the library, it\'s just Spring but it\'s really hot.Moreover, there were many dirty men like homeless in the library.
>>correct
>>Moreover, there are many homeless people in the library.They smelt nasty.
>>correct
There was even drinking a soup of ramen man.
>>There was even a man drinking ramyun.I couldn\'t bear and I came back home within 30 minutes of arriving at the library.
>>correctI have no place for studing. So I can\'t study.
>>correct
>>I have no place to study so I can\'t study.These all is just my excuses to dislike studing.
>>These are all my excuses in studying.
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