Homework 14
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What new traditions could come out of the COVID-19 situation?
A. COCID-19 has changed our life very much. Above all of changes, online communication will be widely used in various ways like business and concert. Since COVID-19 came out, a lot of businesses have held video-conferences and K-pop stars have introduced online concert with VR and AR technology. These are efficient ways to prevent the epidemic from spreading. However it would be harder to understand each other than face-to-face communication. So I hope that COVID-19 disappears soon and people can interact with each other well.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thanks for the time and effort you have invested with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
I really hope this situation will be over, but I\'m pretty sure even if it does, there will be a lot of changes that people would have to adapt to; like probably wearing masks, online transaction and a lot more! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>COVID 19 has changed our lives so much.
Above all of changes, online communication will be widely used in various ways like business and concert.
>>Above all of the changes, online communication will be widely used in various ways like in businesses and concerts.
Since COVID-19 came out, a lot of businesses have held video-conferences and K-pop stars have introduced online concert with VR and AR technology.
>>CORRECT
These are efficient ways to prevent the epidemic from spreading.
>>CORRECT
However it would be harder to understand each other than face-to-face communication.
>>CORRECT
So I hope that COVID-19 disappears soon and people can interact with each other well.
>>CORRECT
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