Homework 14

ESSAY: What do you think is the best inheritance we get from our parents? I think life itself is the best inheritance we get from our parents. Without parents, we can not be born and exist. No matter how hard life is, we can do whatever we want, and live the beautiful world. I feel very appriciated for what I am now living and make out something step by step. We have to celebrate our birthday for our parents not us.

Hi there [이름]!^^ You have a beautiful mind!^^ Your ideas were great and it also made me realize that my life is not just for me but for my parents!^^ Thank you!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: ESSAY: What do you think is the best inheritance we get from our parents?>> CORRECTI think life itself is the best inheritance we get from our parents. >> CORRECT OR> Our live itself is the best gift that we can get from our parents.  Without parents, we can not be born and exist. >>  Without parents, we won\'t be born and won\'t exist. No matter how hard life is, we can do whatever we want, and live the beautiful world. >> CORRECT OR>  No matter how difficult life is, we can be free and live in the beautiful world. I feel very appriciated for what I am now living and make out something step by step. >>  I feel very appriciated for what I am now living and I\'m make out something step by step. We have to celebrate our birthday for our parents not us. >> We have to celebrate our birthday for our parents not just for ourselves.