homework 14
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Is it easy for you to trust other people?
Most of people do mistake at relationship whatever they are nice.
When you meet new people, you don't have to trust their entirely aspect.
So I don't trust other people's everything. Especially it is not recommended concering borrow your money to your friends.
It is important to trust other people, but there are divided sector whatever you trust.
Except about finance, you can trust them depending on their character.
But i think that it is dangerous to borrow cash to people evenif you know them for a long time.
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Is it easy for you to trust other people?Most of people do mistake at relationship whatever they are nice.>>Most people do some mistakes in any relationships.When you meet new people, you don\'t have to trust their entirely aspect.>>When you meet new people you don\'t need to trust them right away.So I don\'t trust other people\'s everything.
>>That is why I don\'t really trust right away.
Especially it is not recommended concering borrow your money to your friends. >>Especially lending money to your friends.It is important to trust other people, but there are divided sector whatever you trust. >>It is important to trust other people but there are some limitations.Except about finance, you can trust them depending on their character.
>>Except for money, yu can trust them depending on their personality.But i think that it is dangerous to borrow cash to people evenif you know them for a long time. >>But I still believe that it is dangerous to lend money to someone you knew even for a long time.
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