homework-14

Hello Ms. [이름]!

It\'s nice to see your compositions again. Actually, one of the country I\'d really like to visit given the chance is Japan. I\'m really curious to see it on my own eyes how the modern times coexist with the old Japan. Hopefully like you, I\'d be able to visit Japan in the very near future. See you tomorrow!

Take care,

~T. Lynn

I visited Japan a few years ago with my family.

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This was my first time.

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So my family and I were very excited.

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It was very interesting.

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Japan was very clean city also Japaneses people were very kind.

>>Japan is a very clean country and the Japanese people were also very kind.
I couldn\'t forget delicious food sushi.

>>I couldn\'t forget  the delicious food sushi.
It was very yummy.

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I want to eat them again.

>>I want to eat it again.
I stayed 2 nights 3 days in Japan.

>>We stayed for two nights and three days in Japan.
I visited Universal studio in Japan which is a big amusement park.

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It was very exciting so we stayed all day there.

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I want to visit Japan with my family.

>>I want to visit Japan with my family again.

OR>> I want to go back to Japan with my family.
So I will save some money for trip.

>>So I will save some money for the trip.