Homework-14 Oct
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I want to change so that I can focus on more studies.
2. My parents always taught me that sincerity and not to lie.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
Great job reflecting on your childhood! I like how you recognized the importance of focusing on your studies and how your parents’ lessons about sincerity and honesty have stayed with you. Your answers are thoughtful and show that you are learning from your past experiences. Keep it up!
~Teacher Polly
1. I want to change so that I can focus on more studies.
>>What I would like to change about my childhood is to focus more on my studies.
2. My parents always taught me that sincerity and not to lie.
>>My parents always taught me to be sincere and never to lie.
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