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2020-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

- What are some things you need for your school? What do you use if for? I need these 3 things. 1. Backpack Reason : I need to take many things for my school. 2. Pencil case Reason : I need to take school supplies for my school. 3. School supplies Reason : I need to write with pencil, erase with eraser, cut with scissors, paste with glue.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for always taking the time to do your homework! 

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila


I need these 3 things
>>CORRECT
OR>>I need a backpack, a pencil case and school supplies.

I need to take many things for my school.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I need to bring many things to school.

 I need to take school supplies for my school.
>>CORRECT

I need to write with pencil, erase with eraser, cut with scissors, paste with glue.
>>I need a pencil, an eraser, scissors, and a glue.

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