Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
between mom and son is first relationship of society.
Son learns about society from their mother first.
It starts to make a relationship with others.
It is not meaning sons should follow their mother.
Sons need to judge right or not and they should control their life.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [Name],
Family is the smallest unit of our society. We build the foundation of our ethics and charcaters within.
Let\'s create a productive society by creaing repsonsible family member.s.
Aki~
between mom and son is first relationship of society.
>>> Between mom and son is the first relationship in society.
>>> The first relationship established in the society is between parents and their children.
Son learns about society from their mother first.
>>> CORRECT!
It starts to make a relationship with others.
>>> CORRECT!
It is not meaning sons should follow their mother.
>>> It doesn\'t mean that sons should follow their mothers.
Sons need to judge right or not and they should control their life.
>>> SOns should be able to judge which is right and wrong and they should follow their our decisions.
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