Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The standard of ethic is different each person.
Many people consider good result is excellent and successful
if their behavior is not illegal.
They think outcome is more important than process.
Greed and wrong consciousness make person unethically.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]ny!
I also stand on your point. I am one of the people who consider the process to be more important than the result as long as it is not illegal.
See you in class.
T. Aki~
The standard of ethic is different each person.
>>> The standard of ethics is different for each person.
Many people consider good result is excellent and successful if their behavior is not illegal.
>>> Many people consider good results to be excellent and successful if their behavior is not illegal.
They think outcome is more important than process.
>>> They think the outcome is more important than the process.
Greed and wrong consciousness make person unethically.
>>> Greed and wrong consciousness make a person unethical.
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