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What my parents are proud of me is that I get good grades on the school exam because when I get good grades, I\'m good and my parents feel good.
강사 첨삭
Your writing is getting better, [이름] [이름]! especially your sentence structure and use of connectors. Keep it up!
- Teacher Angela
What my parents are proud of me is that I get good grades on the school exam because when I get good grades, I\'m good and my parents feel good
>> What my parents are proud of is that I get good grades on my school exams. When I get good grades, I feel good, and my parents feel proud.
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