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Q: What are the common hobbies of young people nowadays? why do you think they love to do that?
A: I think crafting is a common hobby. My friends have hobby make Hanbok(Korean traditional clothes), baking and using a 3D printer.
In my opinion and find small happiness and stress relief in favorite thing make or sharing with friends.
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I think crafting is a common hobby.
>>> CORRECT!
My friends have hobby make Hanbok(Korean traditional clothes), baking and using a 3D printer.
>>> My friends have hobbies like making Hanbok(Korean traditional clothes), baking, and using a 3D printer.
In my opinion and find small happiness and stress relief in favorite thing make or sharing with friends.
>>> In my opinion and find small happiness and stress relief in my favorite things make or share with friends.
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