Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I saw the Grand canyon in the US.
The view of that was overwhelmed me.
I felt This picture which was made by nature for a long time was really great.
They didn\'t want to be great or beautiful.
I thought my conflict was just a progress of my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]NY!
Thank you as always for diligently doing your homework. Grand Canyon is one of the best art created by nature: Admirable and excellent!
Have a great day!
T. Aki~
When I saw the Grand canyon in the US. The view of that was overwhelmed me.
>>>> The view of the Grand Canyon overwhelmed me when I went tot the US.
I felt This picture which was made by nature for a long time was really great.
>>> CORRECT!
They didn\'t want to be great or beautiful.
>>> CORRECT!
I thought my conflict was just a progress of my life.
>>> I thought my conflict was just the progress of my life.
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