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Q: What are the cons of social media and text messaging?
A: I think the cons for both is the limit of expression.
They can use a lot of words or other expressions when they\'re using massages, but they can\'t use their voice and face, so there is a limit.
I think it also could be uncomfortable for the people who\'s typing is slow.
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2. They can use a lot of words or other expressions when they\'re using massages, but they can\'t use their voice and face, so there is a limit.
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Here are some considerations:
1. I think the cons for both is the limit of expression.
>>CORRECT!
2. They can use a lot of words or other expressions when they\'re using massages, but they can\'t use their voice and face, so there is a limit.
>>They can use a lot of words or other expressions when they\'re using messages, but they can\'t use their voices and faces, so there are limits.
3. I think it also could be uncomfortable for the people who\'s typing is slow.
>>I think it could also be uncomfortable for the people whose typing is slow.
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