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2024-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: Who are the kinds of people whom you want to hang out with? A: It\'s the people who have the common interests with me. If people who I hangout with don\'t have any common interests with me, it would be hard for us to choose a topic to talk about. Also, I want a person who doesn\'t really say so much.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. It\'s the people who have the common interests with me.
>>It\'s the people who have common interests with me.

2. If people who I hangout with don\'t have any common interests with me, it would be hard for us to choose a topic to talk about.
>>If the people whom I hang out with don\'t have any common interests with me, it would be hard for us to choose a topic to talk about.

3. Also, I want a person who doesn\'t really say so much.
>>CORRECT!

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