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People might think I am wired.
But I think Olympic didn\'t make good relationship among the countries.
There is a few countries that get award medal.
Most of them are wealthy.
The other countries people can feel lack of something among the strong countries.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
In the past, the purpose of the Olympics is \"camaraderie\" which is to build good relationships among countries. However, for some athletes and countries who don\'t have sportsmanship, it became a competition, showing which country is better in one area.
Good day ahead!
T. Aki~
People might think I am wired.
>>> People might think I am weird.
But I think Olympic didn\'t make good relationship among the countries.
>>> But I think the Olympics didn\'t create good relationships among the countries.
There is a few countries that get award medal.
>>> There is a few countries that get award medals.
Most of them are wealthy.
>>> CORRECT!
The other countries people can feel lack of something among the strong countries.
>>> The other countries people can feel a lack of something among the strong countries.
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