Homework
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Q: When is the best time to have a meal with a bigger group?
A: I think it\'s when the group has something special happened.
People usually have a meal with a group, it\'s because they have special thing happened, and to celebrate that special thing.
I think it would also be the special day for the group like the day when a group was made.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. People usually have a meal with a group, it\'s because they have special thing happened, and to celebrate that special thing.
3. I think it would also be the special day for the group like the day when a group was made.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think it\'s when the group has something special happened.
>>I think it\'s when the group has something special that happened.
2. People usually have a meal with a group, it\'s because they have special thing happened, and to celebrate that special thing.
>>People usually have a meal with a group because a special thing happened, and they want to celebrate that special thing.
3. I think it would also be the special day for the group like the day when a group was made.
>>I think it would also be the special day when the group was made.
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