homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Have you got a sister?
- Yes, I have.
2) Has she got a dog?
- Yes, she has.
3) Have they got a green van?
- No, they haven't
4) Has he got two sisters?
- No, he hasn't
5) Have we got nice teachers?
- Yes, we have.
My country has four seasons Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter.
Nichkhun who is member of 2PM said that his contry also has four seasons.
It is as in the following, Hot, Very hot, Very very hot, Very very very hot.
Thailand, Nichkhun's contry is very hot.
I don't like hot but I like to go trip to a hot country.
I think hot country people is optimistic, kind, pleasant.
Two years ago, I went to Singapore and Bintan of Indonesia.
I and my friends had a good time there.
We met very kind man in Bintan.
He could speak Korean well. He informed us the place to want to go, recommended restaurant,
even went together to the ferry terminal last day. He handled our ticketing.
We appreciated him help.
If I go to a hot country, I may meet such a kind man.
강사 첨삭
Wow, my dear Miss. [Name], you really want to go to our country I guess, kkk..
If that is so, I will be your tour guide and I will show you everything, But I changed my mind, this time it\'s not for free, kkk...Just kidding :D
Anyway, maybe we can talk more about that later my dear..
Cant wait to talk to you again..
Teacher Cam^^
1) Have you got a sister?- Yes, I have.
>>correct2) Has she got a dog? - Yes, she has.
>>correct3) Have they got a green van? - No, they haven\'t
>>correct4) Has he got two sisters? - No, he hasn\'t
>>correct5) Have we got nice teachers?- Yes, we have.>>correctMy country has four seasons Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter.
>>correctNichkhun who is member of 2PM said that his contry also has four seasons.
>>correctIt is as in the following, Hot, Very hot, Very very hot, Very very very hot.
>>correctThailand, Nichkhun\'s contry is very hot.
>>correctI don\'t like hot but I like to go trip to a hot country.
>>I don\'t like to experience hot weather but I like to go on a trip to a country having this kind of weather.I think hot country people is optimistic, kind, pleasant.
>>I think people who live in hot countries are optimistic, kind and pleasant.Two years ago, I went to Singapore and Bintan of Indonesia.
>>Two years ago I went to Singapore and Bintan Indonesia.I and my friends had a good time there.
>>correctWe met very kind man in Bintan.
>>correct
>>We met a very kind man in Bintan.He could speak Korean well.
>>correct
He informed us the place to want to go, recommended restaurant,even went together to the ferry terminal last day. He handled our ticketing.
>>He recommended us the place to go, restaurants and he even went with us to the ferry terminal on the last day of our trip. He handled our ticketing.We appreciated him help.
>>We appreciated him so much.
>>We appreciated his help so much.If I go to a hot country, I may meet such a kind man.
>>correct
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