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Q: Which do you want to master, writing stories or writing poems? Why?
A: I think I would rather master writing stories than writing poems.
If I master writing stories, then I can use it in a lot of fields like writing books, writing senarios for movie and a lot of other ways.
But I think if I only master writing poems, I can\'t use it in that much fields.
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2. If I master writing stories, then I can use it in a lot of fields like writing books, writing senarios for movie and a lot of other ways.
3. But I think if I only master writing poems, I can\'t use it in that much fields.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think I would rather master writing stories than writing poems.
>>CORRECT!
2. If I master writing stories, then I can use it in a lot of fields like writing books, writing senarios for movie and a lot of other ways.
>>If I master writing stories, then I can use it in a lot of fields like writing books, writing scenarios for movies, and a lot more.
3. But I think if I only master writing poems, I can\'t use it in that much fields.
>>But if I only master writing poems, I can\'t use it in many fields.
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