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Q: What\'s the best story to read when bored?
A: I tihnk the best story to read when bored is fantasy stories.
I think fantasy stories have the original ideas in the story, and there\'s a lot of interesting objects or creatures, so I think it can avoid the bordom.
But I think most stories of all genres can avoid the bordom if it\'s written well.
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2. I think fantasy stories have the original ideas in the story, and there\'s a lot of interesting objects or creatures, so I think it can avoid the bordom.
3. But I think most stories of all genres can avoid the bordom if it\'s written well.
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Here are some things to note:
1. I tihnk the best story to read when bored is fantasy stories.
>>I think the best story to read when bored is fantasy.
2. I think fantasy stories have the original ideas in the story, and there\'s a lot of interesting objects or creatures, so I think it can avoid the bordom.
>>I think fantasy stories have the original ideas in the story, and there are a lot of interesting objects or creatures, so I think it can avoid boredom.
3. But I think most stories of all genres can avoid the bordom if it\'s written well.
>>But I think most stories of all genres can avoid boredom if they\'re written well.
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