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2024-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: What kind of student do you want to be when you\'re in high school? in college? A: I just want to be a normal student with passion. I don\'t want to be a special student because I don\'t like getting attention of a lot of people. Also, I want to study hard and live a satisfying life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I just want to be a normal student with passion.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>I just want to be a normal but passionate student.

2. I don\'t want to be a special student because I don\'t like getting attention of a lot of people.
>>I don\'t want to be a special student because I don\'t like getting attention from a lot of people.

3. Also, I want to study hard and live a satisfying life.
>>CORRECT!

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