Homework
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Q: What time do you want to be in and out of school? Why?
A: I think the time I go to school now is fine, and I want it to be ended earlier.
I tihnk the time it is starting is fine becuase it\'s the time when I get up and prepare for going to school.
But if I stay in school for so long, it gets boring, so I want it to be done earlier.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I tihnk the time it is starting is fine becuase it\'s the time when I get up and prepare for going to school.
3. But if I stay in school for so long, it gets boring, so I want it to be done earlier.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I think the time I go to school now is fine, and I want it to be ended earlier.
>>I think the time I go to school now is fine, and I want it to end earlier.
2. I tihnk the time it is starting is fine becuase it\'s the time when I get up and prepare for going to school.
>>I think the time it starts is fine because it\'s the time when I get up and prepare to go to school.
3. But if I stay in school for so long, it gets boring, so I want it to be done earlier.
>>But it gets boring if I stay in school for too long, so I want it to be done earlier.
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